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I am washed inside and made of models –
bones from our toy medical kit when we were three and
life was so much simpler (caught backwards, like fairy footsteps).
I only smile a fragment,
because the world is very, very old (and has seen everything).
We do not escape
definition; we avoid it, sliding past
two-dimensional friends
that never made it into our history.
I do not swallow lies stale – they go down me, wet and silent
at first, and harden in my belly. Then my eyes are Venetian:
swollen glass caught at the wrong size –
dropping eye-glitter
careful china faces. And like the turn of the waterways –
I wonder if wishing is a displacement; we fall out of alignment with the straightened world to make circles –
geometrically, they are less constant. A square steadies, rules; they shatter
into orbit.
But they are also wheels, to soften the grate of time
as it slurs ashes – dead things
like grey rats, dun and comfortable with their world. I prefer
the toes of dreams;
(treading on my dress folds from the sixteenth century
that do not belong in reality)
but should I?
bones from our toy medical kit when we were three and
life was so much simpler (caught backwards, like fairy footsteps).
I only smile a fragment,
because the world is very, very old (and has seen everything).
We do not escape
definition; we avoid it, sliding past
two-dimensional friends
that never made it into our history.
I do not swallow lies stale – they go down me, wet and silent
at first, and harden in my belly. Then my eyes are Venetian:
swollen glass caught at the wrong size –
dropping eye-glitter
careful china faces. And like the turn of the waterways –
I wonder if wishing is a displacement; we fall out of alignment with the straightened world to make circles –
geometrically, they are less constant. A square steadies, rules; they shatter
into orbit.
But they are also wheels, to soften the grate of time
as it slurs ashes – dead things
like grey rats, dun and comfortable with their world. I prefer
the toes of dreams;
(treading on my dress folds from the sixteenth century
that do not belong in reality)
but should I?
Literature
Christmas presents
i.
asking dad
"what would mum like?"
he's no idea either
ii.
at the same store -
buying gifts for
my girl & mum
iii.
married 20 years,
her fake smile more real
than my silk roses
iv.
unwrapping your gift too eagerly,
I miss the tsutsumu!
v.
your present
a "new" novel;
I find a bookmark
vi.
next Christmas
seeing his gift, dad tells me
"I've read this"
Literature
City
Once you walked out uninvited on the streets of Manhattan. The streets, they heaved and retched and spat you back out.
This was at the Citys orders.
You lay regurgitated on the sidewalk, with a violent crack in your spine. You were shaken like a whip. The City, she stands over you wearing an expression of distaste and grim satisfaction. Inaudibly she speaks into her cell phone. You raise yourself up on one elbow and discover that the Port Authority looks on gleaming above you, a silent bulky monster in the dark. It stands as witness to your distress. Shh, it says, I sympathize, but dont tell her.
A large neon sign sings WTF. Th
Literature
winter
i didn't think that the artificial fireplace logs
would turn out to be
some kind of cruel metaphor
but here i am,
trying to ingest antifreeze to
deal with the shivers you i
send across
raw clinging collarbones , d
own
clanking vertebrae screaming at me to
let go or i'll melt into your
chest like the snowflake that lost its 6th
arm
and you
know that's not how it works and
i do too.
i turn around
and realize that
you
' re not beside
me, anymore
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Title should be Circles (Venetian Dreams), but dA doesn't allow brackets in titles >.>
Yes... more poetry! XDD
Something that came to me at about 1:30 am; I scribbled it down quickly and then edited it a lot. I get weird flashes of inspiration at night XD I think it’s to do with being close to sleep (and thus, closer to dreams.)
Critique is love. Any critique, this is something of an idea that won’t form itself properly and I feel like my language/description isn’t as good as it normally is. I’m really not sure what this is, so I’m especially interested to know if anyone can actually understand it, or if my half-conscious ramblings make no sense whatsoever I’ll probably revise it more later...
Also, I feel like I overuse semi-colons (and dashes). any suggestions?
I probably won’t be submitting anything very much for a bit – I’m committed to NaNoWriMo through November and I probably won’t have time for much other writing – I have lots of WIPs to finish, though, so hopefully I’ll get them done soon.
Yes... more poetry! XDD
Something that came to me at about 1:30 am; I scribbled it down quickly and then edited it a lot. I get weird flashes of inspiration at night XD I think it’s to do with being close to sleep (and thus, closer to dreams.)
Critique is love. Any critique, this is something of an idea that won’t form itself properly and I feel like my language/description isn’t as good as it normally is. I’m really not sure what this is, so I’m especially interested to know if anyone can actually understand it, or if my half-conscious ramblings make no sense whatsoever I’ll probably revise it more later...
Also, I feel like I overuse semi-colons (and dashes). any suggestions?
I probably won’t be submitting anything very much for a bit – I’m committed to NaNoWriMo through November and I probably won’t have time for much other writing – I have lots of WIPs to finish, though, so hopefully I’ll get them done soon.
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I wonder if wishing is a displacement; we fall out of alignment with the straightened world to make circles –
geometrically, they are less constant.
OhmyGOD. I just fell in love, three times over.
Beautiful.
geometrically, they are less constant.
OhmyGOD. I just fell in love, three times over.
Beautiful.